I have learned so much about writing essays this year. I have never though of my self as a great writer, and I still don't, but I feel that I am much better now than at the beginning of the year. I think beeing good at writing essays is a very good skill to have. Litterary analysis is a good way to explore the authors intentions.
I have a couple shortcomings in my essay that I need to fix. For example I can never come up with a good, original title. I also don't have a very solid hook, and without a good hook anyone reading my essay will probly judge it right away as boreing. But I do think I have some good body pargraphs and qoutes. But This weekend I am going to edit and fix parts of my essay.
Friday, May 21, 2010
Thursday, May 13, 2010
Over the summer when I have nothing else to do and the time to read it I want to finish reading Deathstroke by Richard Kelley. I started reading it at the begining of the school year but then we started reading To Kill A Mockingbird and then I did not have the time to keep reading so I eventually just gave up and forgot about it but when I have the time I would really like to finish it. The book is about aliens attacking the Earth, which in most books is all the same. But in this book the story is based in the Northwest Washington region, and the author describes some parts right here in Olympia. The Other book I want to read is The Giver by Lois Lowry. One of my friends has been pestering me to read that book for the last two years and I have always been putting it off. I have heard it is one of the best books ever. So I guess I will just have to find out.
Friday, May 7, 2010
Dreams
I had a dream a couple weeks ago about some random guy with a baseball bat attacking me and then stabbing me with it. I did avoid baseball bats the next day but I did not think of an elbow right in the same spot from soccer which lead to a broken rib. I believe I am more closely aligned with Mercutio because something actually happened to both of us unlike Romeo who only dreams of things happening. For example, Romeo has a bad feeling at the beginning of the book and since then things have gone down hill for them since.
Sunday, May 2, 2010
Romeo and Juliet Present day
The present day has so many things that are influenced by Romeo and Juliet. I found this song named Romeo and Juliet by Dire Straits. The point of this song is to show how some people are just made for each other. "A pair of star crossed lovers..." It is also a message for young people to make sure they are choosing the right person and not just jumping into something that they are going to regret.
A love-struck Romeo sings the streets a serenade
Laying everybody low with a love song that he made.
Finds a streetlight, steps out of the shade
Says something like, "You and me babe, how about it?"
Juliet says, "Hey, it's Romeo, you nearly gave me a heart attack!"
He's underneath the window, she's singing, "Hey la, my boyfriend's back.
You shouldn't come around here singing up to people like that...
Anyway, what you gonna do about it?"
ROMEO:
Juliet, the dice was loaded from the start
And I bet when you exploded into my heart
And I forget I forget the movie song.
When you gonna realize it was just that the time was wrong, Juliet?
Come up on different streets, they're both the streets of shame.
Both dirty, both mean, yes, in the dream it was just the same
And I dreamed your dream for you and now your dream is real.
How can you look at me as if I was just another one of your deals?
When you can fall for chains of silver,
You can fall for chains of gold,
You can fall for pretty strangers
And the promises they hold.
You promised me everything, you promised me thick and thin, yeah!
Now you just say, "Oh Romeo? Yeah, you know I used to have a scene with him".
Juliet, when we made love, you used to cry.
You said, "I love you like the stars above, I'll love you 'til I die".
There's a place for us, you know the movie song.
When you gonna realize it was just that the time was wrong, Juliet?
I can't do the talk, like the talk on TV
And I can't do a love song, like the way it's meant to be.
I can't do everything, but I'll do anything for you.
I can't do anything, 'cept be in love with you!
And all I do is miss you and the way we used to be.
All I do is keep the beat... and bad company.
Now all I do is kiss you through the bars of a rhyme,
Juliet, I'd do the stars with you any time!
Juliet, when we made love you used to cry.
You said, "I love you like the stars above, I'll love you 'til I die".
There's a place for us, you know the movie song.
When you gonna realize it was just that the time was wrong, Juliet?
NARRATOR:
And a love-struck Romeo sings a street-suss serenade
Laying everybody low with a lovesong that he made
Finds a convenient streetlight, steps out of the shade
He says something like, "You and me babe, how about it?"
ROMEO:
You and me babe, how about it?
A love-struck Romeo sings the streets a serenade
Laying everybody low with a love song that he made.
Finds a streetlight, steps out of the shade
Says something like, "You and me babe, how about it?"
Juliet says, "Hey, it's Romeo, you nearly gave me a heart attack!"
He's underneath the window, she's singing, "Hey la, my boyfriend's back.
You shouldn't come around here singing up to people like that...
Anyway, what you gonna do about it?"
ROMEO:
Juliet, the dice was loaded from the start
And I bet when you exploded into my heart
And I forget I forget the movie song.
When you gonna realize it was just that the time was wrong, Juliet?
Come up on different streets, they're both the streets of shame.
Both dirty, both mean, yes, in the dream it was just the same
And I dreamed your dream for you and now your dream is real.
How can you look at me as if I was just another one of your deals?
When you can fall for chains of silver,
You can fall for chains of gold,
You can fall for pretty strangers
And the promises they hold.
You promised me everything, you promised me thick and thin, yeah!
Now you just say, "Oh Romeo? Yeah, you know I used to have a scene with him".
Juliet, when we made love, you used to cry.
You said, "I love you like the stars above, I'll love you 'til I die".
There's a place for us, you know the movie song.
When you gonna realize it was just that the time was wrong, Juliet?
I can't do the talk, like the talk on TV
And I can't do a love song, like the way it's meant to be.
I can't do everything, but I'll do anything for you.
I can't do anything, 'cept be in love with you!
And all I do is miss you and the way we used to be.
All I do is keep the beat... and bad company.
Now all I do is kiss you through the bars of a rhyme,
Juliet, I'd do the stars with you any time!
Juliet, when we made love you used to cry.
You said, "I love you like the stars above, I'll love you 'til I die".
There's a place for us, you know the movie song.
When you gonna realize it was just that the time was wrong, Juliet?
NARRATOR:
And a love-struck Romeo sings a street-suss serenade
Laying everybody low with a lovesong that he made
Finds a convenient streetlight, steps out of the shade
He says something like, "You and me babe, how about it?"
ROMEO:
You and me babe, how about it?
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